OutRunner, an FTL webcomic

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Mranth0ny62
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OutRunner, an FTL webcomic

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I've started a webcomic last week and I've posted about it on reddit and people like it (all my posts about it where in the most popular) so I though I would post about it on the forum as well!

the story is about 3 friends: Filip, Nazia and Jack who are about to go on their first mission together!
their goal is to prevent the rebels from winning the war and thus save the federation!

link to the webcomic

I will try to post them every other days, so don't forget to subscribe to the webcomic or put it on your rss feed or put it in your favorites to keep track of the latest comics :D

also, if you have any constructive criticism post them here, they help a lot!
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Re: OutRunner, an FTL webcomic

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You got a chuckle out of me :)

One suggestion, instead of a computer console (Implying, I'd assume, that they're on the radio) I'd suggest some sort of monitor looking thing with a picture of a slug on it, implying they're talking over some sort of video phone. You'd probably have to make one per creature type and maybe one each for male/female humans.
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I like it! It amused me.
It looks like you're having some issues with the glow around the ship. I'd advise cleaning that up just a little bit.
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Re: OutRunner, an FTL webcomic

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English Narwhal wrote:I like it! It amused me.
It looks like you're having some issues with the glow around the ship. I'd advise cleaning that up just a little bit.
on the last comic? it's because they have their distress signal on ;)
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Re: OutRunner, an FTL webcomic

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I made a blog post explaining the lack of comic these past few days:
http://outrunner.webcomic.ws/blog/
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Part I: Jump 3 is out!

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the new comic is out!
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Part I: Jump 4 is out!

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And another one to make up for the lack of comics sunday and tuesday
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