Thoughts on Interactive Adventure Story?

[KanitkarRana]

Engaging in a unique storytelling venture, I'm recounting the adventures of a group through various perspectives. In this instance, three teenagers explore a station, facing curious gazes and questions. An engi named JUKA, now Jukoda, joins them after a brief interaction. Interested in the contents of the girl's bag, he receives an unexpected response about family photos. The trio, including Derek, expects challenges on the way back to their ship, The Willow, but with the addition of Jukoda, their journey takes an unexpected turn. What's your take on this unfolding narrative?