So it seems the versions keep jumping ahead. I'm going to post in case these haven't been fixed. (Oh, as far as vanilla, I don't remember what is or isn't; I just post what I think could be corrected.)
The biggest thing was in Tuco's Proving Grounds: there was a store with triangle shown by Long Range Scanners. I went to it, and the dialog box said a pirate was going to intercept me before I got to the store. So I thought I was going into a fight and chose an appropriate option. Then the store menu popped up.
After I closed it, I won the fight. I think I had a dialog box about being able to go to the store, but the menu didn't pop up (though the store button at top was there).
"(Production Augment) Produce something
on-board*." - on board.
"
The* ship maintenance should give the team something to do. Waiting is not good for crew
moral**." - 1) remove "The," start sentence with "Ship"; 2) morale.
"1. (Improved Internal AI) Try to draw up some more schematics for
on-board* drones." - onboard.
Next: "You sit down with your crew* and the matter is quickly decided.
4. Change your mind.
You** rather rely on your sentient crew." - 1) add comma after "crew"; 2) You'd.
'The outpost hails you after the store
was* destroyed,** "Thanks for the help. We've been harassed
non-stop*** by these scouts...." ' - 1) is; 2) replace comma with period or colon; 3) nonstop.
'The Rockman wants you to have a look at the scrap materials you collected. "... makeshift guiding devices,* these other components are instable** enough...." ' - 1) replace comma with semicolon; 2) unstable.
'You receive a hail from a small station,* "In accordance
to** general system law*** we identify ourselves as
Rebel occupied**** ..." ' - 1) replace comma with colon or period; 2) with; 3) add comma after "law"; 4) Rebel-occupied.
Drone Uplink Jammer description: "Attempts to
scrambles*
the** enemy drone communication..." - 1) scramble; 2) remove "the."
Shuttle event, next box: 'After waiting several minutes... you finally receive a hail,* "Are you with the Federation. ..." ' - replace comma with period or colon.
'A disabled Federation craft drifts
at* this beacon. "We've been attacked by Rebels,** I'm the only one left. May I come aboard*** Captain?" ' - 1) near; 2) replace comma with period; 3) add comma after "aboard."
"You arrive at a quarantine checkpoint set up around this beacon. The Zoltan security officers do the talking,* ...." -
replace comma with period.
The Rockman is seriously wondering how it feels to be burned. ... "What do you mean by "pain",* Captain?"
- single quotes around 'pain'; move comma right after 'pain' inside last quote.
'The Rockman is nowhere to be found. ... "Tactical planning, Captain,* is it urgent?" ' - replace comma with period, capitalize "Is"; or perhaps: "Is this urgent? I am studying tactical planning, Captain."
'You receive a
wide-band* automated message,** "Welcome to our humble trade depot...." ' - 1) wideband; 2) replace comma with period or colon.
'You receive * hail from an
FTL core powered stations,** "Welcome to your own private hostile encounter,*** you are our thirty-sixth ...." ' - 1) add "a" after "receive"; 2) "FTL-core-powered station" and replace comma with period or colon; 3) replace comma with period, capitalize "You."
Next: 'You receive a hail from a pirate, his voice sounding dark and hollow,* "If I go down** I'll be taking you with me!".*** ' - 1) replace comma with period or colon; 2) add comma after "down"; 3) remove period after quote.
Anecdote about hostile nebula: I entered an AI sector once (once!). Nanobot clouds eat away at your hull, right? Well, the whole first half of the sector was nebula!
I don't remember how much hull I had entering, but I barely had enough to survive the clouds and run away from the AI ships I encountered to get to clear space. Maybe that kind of sector layout doesn't happen too often (and so far I haven't been in a situation where the only jump is to an AI sector), but I can certainly imagine starting the sector with less hull and never being able to get out of the nebula.